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Computer Gijinka by Amethystheart14 Computer Gijinka by Amethystheart14
Ahhh! Forgot to upload this earlier...
I was actually debating to place a background in.. but I didn't since I did this more for practice, rather than anything? Toying with lighting and whatnot. * v *

It was fun to color it, and I haven't colored/done much for art lately so it was nice to do e v e

In a way I think she's modelled out of my computer/tower combination thanks to her colors LOL;;;
She'smoodysometimes. /shotttt


Critiques open to things I may want to fix about posing/coloring/anything you can see is greatly appreciated * 7 * <3


Done in : Paint Tool Sai
Time : 3-4 hours total ( many times of mid procrastination at work... been working on it for two days rofl )
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With this piece of work I find the face you've drawn is captivating. Her features are very beautifully drawn. The hair is also very well drawn and colored as well. The anatomy in this piece is very good, except for the foot. From what I have learned in my anatomy courses I think that the front of the foot should be facing the audience more. Possibly, the other hands and feet cannot be seen and could be worked on a bit more; and by that I mean, where do they place themselves on the screen. The way I view it is once they reach a certain point on the character it may not be thought of where the foot or hand is. Although without thinking critically I think you could get away with the way it is now. It looks good, but its mostly the hand that leaves me wondering. Other then that, this is a very good piece you've drawn and colored. Keep up the good work.
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I Like the amount of details you've used to draw her hair, with all the streaks and lighting. Your colouring is as perfect as always. The motion you've added to this piece gives a nice emphasis to the techness of her outfit.

Her anatomy is fairly accurate, but some should be revised :

◆ The ring finger and pinky of her left hand should not be the same length as the middle finger. The ring finger is supposed to be approximately the same length as the index finger, and the pinky needs to be shortened.
◆ I find that the elbow seems somewhat awkward. With the current shading at the bend of the elbow, it seems as though she is completely bending her entire arm, which causes her upper arm to look short. You should perhaps try shading an area at the bend that only covers about one fifth of her upper arm, and see how that goes. The same goes for her right leg.

That's all for anatomy, but there are still some other things you should consider :
◆ If the belt is to be positioned around that area of her waist, it would probably slip off the edge of her bottom.
◆ For advance advice, rather than outlining the green glows with black lines, you can try a matching shade of a darker green, and try using a transparent background.

Overall, it's a cute character. Keep up the neat work! (:
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Kaleidoscopic-Nymph Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oooooo this is so nice, i love the colors and she's beautiful :)
reminds me of one of my OCs <3
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Amethystheart14 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks o u o /
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akiicchi Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
oo cute design * /// * i like the glowing accessories a lot :iconcoolplz:
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Amethystheart14 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dfgdasdf Thank youuu!! * v * <333
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miyuu1chan Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool ;)
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Amethystheart14 Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks 8D
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner May 6, 2012
Sweet
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Amethystheart14 Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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Flips-a-PuddleSplash Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so pretty >A<b *Hugs piccy*
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Amethystheart14 Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks Splashhh * 7 * /
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