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Sakuya Complete - Poster Animethon2012

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I had this done yesterday.. Just thought I'd spam uploads today a bit with whatever I got done in the last 2 weeks.
I got Keine coming along soon toooooo ~
:iconexcitedblushplz:

Enjoy!
Finally done thoughh amg yes.
You'll see this at Animethon 2012, if you're there! :D

- This is not the full sized image. c:

I'm also entering this into a contest for dressing the characters up in steampunk ahaha;; Hence her different outfit * A *
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

first off, great work with the coloring..looks very nice and clean, and very even throughout the whole character..<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

the very first thing that i noticed is her arm(the one holding, knives?) it seems too small and thin..then the three knives that she's dodging, i think it would have looked better if it was closer to her, so that it looks like her enemy is a really good shot, like it almost hit her but she's just faster and better than her enemy..<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> or am i getting it wrong?<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> next thing is the whole image, if you'll make a full-body artwork it will look better if you position the character in the middle so that there won't be any cut, like the one here were her foot got cut off just by a little...if the character for example had large wings or tails, it's alright for them to get cut, that adds an effect on the whole composition, but don't cut the character itself..i just think the small cut on her foot looks awkward..<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> and lastly, you did great with the coloring, like what i said it looks nice and even throughout, the coloring style that is, but the lighting is not..on her arm the shading is too intense when it shouldn't be, cause the light is hitting it.and maybe use a hard brush for the parts that are closer to each other, like the skirt's shadow on her thighs, i think it should look "harder"..

these are just from my point of view..i'm not an expert as well, i just thought i'd give a comment and help out a fellow artist improve..<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> overall, great work..<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>